Aerin Fuchs

CHARACTER

Name: Aerin Fuchs

Age: 17, born on the 6th day of September

Gender: Female

Species: Human

Symbol:

Occupation: Student at Beacon

Appearance: Height 5ft. 5, weight 120 lbs., pale freckled skin, auburn hair in a shoulder length ponytail, bangs, bright red-pink bow around ponytail, tan button up shirt, burgundy vest, green jacket with brown trim and buttoned down cuffs, dark brown capris cut off just below the knee, zip up combat boots, leather strap worn around shoulder that holds Schlacht Rose to her back

History: The daughter of a watchmaker and a seamstress, Aerin grew up with a middle class lifestyle. At the age of 12, her mother died, and her father sent her away to her grandfather's to be trained as a huntress, and make a better life for herself. She trained for 4 years with her grandfather, and was accepted into Beacon at only 16. While she is a very advanced fighter and strategist, being trained solo has weakened her sense of teamwork

Personality: She is very introverted, and does not open up to people easily due to a lack of trust imbued in her by her father giving her away. She prefers alone time and reading to hanging out with people, and spends her time not reading or in school to train.

Strengths: Very adept fighter, great strategist, very intelligent, proficient tracker

Weaknesses: Poor sense of teamwork, not very good at taking orders, not willing to trust easily, narrowminded, bad people skills

Semblance: Hyper awareness

WEAPON

Name: Schlacht Rose (sh-LA-k-t RO-se)

Primary Form: A curved knife exactly 1 ft. in length

Secondary Form: The knife folds out to a giant shuriken style blade

Tertiary Form: The shuriken blade breaks into two, double bladed knives

History: Aerin forged and built Schlacht Rose on her own, as part of her training with her grandfather

Ok, first things first.  Although it's not exactly a an extremely important requirement it may help to add more to her history for the sake of having something to look back to as you RP, that way you'd have a solid base line to what experiences you could use if another char asks about her past or whatnot. Personality wise maybe you'd like to add more too.

Strengths and weaknesses have to be fleshed out a bit more. I'd like to see more battle related stuff. Add her limitations, her abilities, style, or mannerisms that may affect her overall in battle or even in normal everyday life.

The semblance is too Vague. Just saying Hyper awareness could mean many things. Describing it would be extremely preferable and take note that most if not all semblances have a direct relationship to aura.

Weapon could also use some more description such as appearance and something that'll give an idea to how it changes from one form to another.

You could view the approved characters section for ideas on how detailed someone should be.

Moved to MIA.