Lance Skaia

CHARACTER

Name: Lance Skaia

Age: November 11 and 20

Gender: Male

Symbol: Soon

Appearance: He is a tall male about 6'0 and 180lbs with an athletic build with a 6-pack and is somewhat buff. He has red hair that is spiked up and he has red eyes that look very sharp.

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Personality: He is very fierce and threatening and will snap if he is annoyed enough. He can be gentle and loving and caring at times but only to people that have broken through his stone heart. He will act flustered if a lady teases him or if he likes that lady. He will speak only the truth if he is shown something sweet in front of him.

History: He has lived in Vale his whole life and he was graduating top of his class in Signal and he also graduated from Beacon and he is now a successful huntsmen but visits Beacon as a friend of the Professors and the Headmaster. He refuses to talk about his past although he said it involved a belt, fire and fire ants. What he won't say is his father and him were out hunting and his father prepared a Molotov cocktail while he was picking up his game. His father threw the Molotov cocktail and he was in the way so he was set aflame. After that was over he tried to run away. Once he was far he used his belt as a strap to hold his things, until it wrapped around his neck while he walked past a tree. He cut the belt only to fall in a pit of fire ants. The fire ants were the last straw so he ran to a cave and spent a year there. In the end, he wandered to Vale and was awarded with a scholarship to Signal and soon after into Beacon and finished a year earlier when he should have. After all of this he turned into a fierce, and cold young man.

Strength: He is amazing at sports and he is a deadly huntsman and he is amazing at attacking multiple enemies at once and creating distractions.

Weakness: Belts, fire ant, sweets, will never suspect suprise attacks or people who hit from behind, and has a fear of Beowolves.

WEAPON 1

Name: Mastígio (Greek for Lash)

Primary Form: A silver sword with runes writted all over it, the runes are red and the handle is black. The handle can extend an extra inch. The runes can make the sword ignite when he is facing someone tough, but that has never happened to him.

Secondary Form/Function:

History: He created Mastígio with Bléximo in Signal. They were both inspired by his past with fire. Mastígio was originally not supposed to have runes until he decided to enchant it with fire dust. Some huntsmen say it resembles his distrusting heart. Mastígio is used on it's own most of the time because he doesn't dual wield his swords unless he is fighting multiple enemies or Beowolves.

WEAPON 2

Name: Bléximo (Greek for Tangle)

Primary Form: A black 4 pointed greatsword he wields with one hand. The handle is black and twisted so he can wield it easier

Secondary Form/Function: A chain sword that will de-attach into segments. Enhanced with fire dust.

History: Bléximo was created alongside Mastígio. It was enhanced with fire dust and it was used to kill his very first Grimm as a huntsmen. Other huntsmen say the sword is as black as his heart. Bléximo is usually never used solo unless he is in a duel and wants to wrap his sword around the enemies weapon. The only other time it is used solo is for transportation. It is usually his rarer used weapon. There are chains the seperate each segment so it is able to wrap around weapons and it can be used to swing around. He uses it to attack large mobs of Grimm.

Last approval was on the 15th of October.

This can't receive approval till the 29th at earliest as that will be 2 weeks.

He doesn't like to talk about his past? Okay, you still need to write about it.

What do the runes on the sword do?

Also I am informed by my film major friend that fiery would be used to describe passion. If you wanted him to be cold and rude towards people, icy or stone would work better.

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Your strength section is short, but acceptable. Your weaknesses however, aren't sufficient. You need more weaknesses beyond what you have. Sweets, fire ants, and belts... aren't likely to come up in combat, and as your character is a combat capable fighter, you must have some kind of weakness somewhere.

Also, could you explain what you mean by the weapon splits into four segments?

Your character is 20 years old. Is he a new arrival at Beacon, or has he been there for several years? Please specify the case under your history.

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Both of the weaknesses you posted could easily be strengths. Focusing on singular targets allows you to concentrate firepower with others, and attacking in a proper turn order would help ensure you don't get in an allies way. Either come up with new ones, or word them in a way that they are a detriment. "Unable to handle fighting multiple opponents at once" would be a better way to word the first of the two.

However, after rechecking, your strengths list you are great at fighting multiple opponents at once. But then how is a weakness only fights one at a time if you are great at fighting more than one?


You also didn't explain your weapon's ability with any additional detail.

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Alright, you've changed your weakness and its fine now.

You still haven't explained your second weapon's ability. It is a chainsword that can split into segments somehow. How? And how is it able to wrap around people's weapons?

Edited.

I still don't understand it. I assume a chainsword is a sword with a rotating chain like a chainsaw. Or, its a serrated blade with many teeth similar to the chain of a chainsaw. I don't quite get how that could split into for segments, or what they would do even.

Approved, then. Weapon was described in chat. Its a whip blade with 4 sections.

Approved.