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PostSubject: Xarias Fury   Xarias Fury Icon_minitimeSun Nov 17, 2013 11:13 am

Xarias Fury

Name: Xarias Fury

Age:
18 - Born on the 19th of the first month
Gender: Male

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Occupation: Freelancer

Appearance:
Messy black hair, sharp brown eyes, serious look on his face, slight stubble. Height 5'7, medium build. Wears goggles hanging around neck and a necklace with a silver crown hanging down from it. Wears a blue aviator jacket and a black t-shirt with a silver crown emblem. wears dark cargo pants with multiple pockets and fashions a small sling bag around his shoulder. wears black combat boots and has a belt with the same silver crown on it.

History:
Born into a large family Xarias learned how to be independent at a young age. Deciding to be able to protect his family was his number one priority. At the age of 12 he was sent to an academy (name to be disclosed) to learn and choose his way of life, having a natural affinity to quickly adapt to his surroundings and a flexible lifestyle he always seemed to be able to fit in except with the most extreme of people. Has a nack for music and learned how to play some instruments out of pure curiosity so while at the academy he learned how to play and sing. Having few truly close friends he never seemed to find people he could truly trust his feelings to especially when faced with problems ranging from a simple math problem to techniques on how to fight monsters. This lead to him being especially isolated at times and learning to be independent. Although he didn't stand out as much as most of his class he was always said to have the potential to do greater things, being as he was he never truly understood what they meant by that. At his academy he learned how to wield few weapons and had a natural ability to quickly learn how to use any weapon to his advantage. When told to design his own weapon on the other hand he struggled hard to balance it to his max potential. After designing his weapon for the first time he then decided to try it out on real monsters but the higher-ups had strict conditions and training before any one would be allowed. One night he snuck out of his dorm to try out his new weapon but a friend of his followed him out of worry. Being one of his close friends she tried to convince him to stop what he was doing but being as stubborn as he was, and exited no less, he ignored her and headed for the forest near his academy, a forest known to be both training and hunting grounds. As he wandered into the woods his friend kept following him, she was quiet but he got irritated when no monsters were showing up so he yelled at her and forced her to go away. The girl merely nodded but seemed to be dragging her feet as she left. Later on around dawn having seen no monsters whatsoever he decided to go back and apologize for being so mean to the girl. On his way back he heard a scream and rushed to where the sound came from. He cursed himself for being too slow and for leaving the girl alone unarmed. By the time he got to her she was already bleeding and the monster that attacked her shifted it's gaze towards Xarias. The monster lunged but Xarias managed to defend himself and fight back the monster. Later on more monsters seemed to gather at the scene, he was surrounded so he decided to defend the girl or die trying. Cutting down monster after monster he was finally wearing out but too many remained. As the original monster lunged at him he prepared for it but got mortally wounded. as he blacked out he saw a figure come out of the forest and slew the rest of the monsters. The next thing he knew they were back at the academy at the infirmary. While resting he couldn't bring himself to talk and apologize to the girl who was in the adjacent room. One he was out he decided to apologize but when he came to her room she was already gone and only an adult with her belonging was there. She was to be transferred and he got scolded and slapped on the face by the man he was soon to find out to be the girls father. Right before her car left he chased after her and apologized promising to make it up to her some day, she smiled and said something he could here as the windows closed down, then the car left. Xarias spent the rest of his stay at the academy training intensely and fighting every battle to learn the most he can. He graduated his academy but decided to spend the rest of his life learning on his own. After bidding farewell to his family and friends he went out and traveled around the world searching for what he felt was missing from him. That empty void he was always trying so hard to fill. He spent his free time freelancing for jobs such as hunting and whatnot to build up his reputation but keeping his name hidden for various reasons. He learned much on his own but decided to step up a notch and find harder opponents to prove his worth and make up for his sins. He keeps the silver crown, a symbol of his academy, with him to remind him of his worth.

Personality:
Serious most of the time but can be a hearty person with those he's close with. Tries to do his best when he feels like it but doesn't like being told what to do. constantly day dreams and thinks about various ideas whilst still being as alert as ever. Shy around people he doesn't know and doesn't talk much even around those he's acquainted with. Doesn't like talking much but can be pretty friendly when he knows the person. Has a constant feeling of lacking so he never feels satisfied unless he can prove it by doing something himself. He won't give something up if he want's or if someone else's life is on the line yet he gives up on himself if he's alone.

Strengths: Adaptable to his environments and uses it to his advantage such as tall structures as vantage points and sniping spots and as possible surfaces to grapple to for quick maneuverability to get in an out of combat. Has a nack of being determined to his goal if another person's in peril or if it benefits more than it loses. Knows how to think on his feet especially in tight situations.

Weakness:
Lacks confidence in himself if he isn't familiar of something and even though he wants to help people he rarely asks for help from strangers or even friends if he feels uncomfortable , powerful but can lose stamina after long battles so he makes up for it by picking enemies off far away to thin out numbers and using his environment to his advantage, indecisive when making big decisions and more often than not chooses to leave things as is until the last moment.

Semblance:
Extreme Burst
Enhanced Senses and reflexes along with bursts of speed during tight situations, gives him a slight feeling of enhanced consciousness. Activates by will power but only lasts a few seconds, depending on how long he can stay concentrated. Sometimes activates subconsciously, especially when in the face of defeat or failure, his aura is powered by his will power to protect rather than defend himself.

He can go into an extreme form of this called Relentless Burst where he can have an overdrive and is quite similar to "bullet time". Although in this form he has increased physical speed he tends to lose his composure and can go berserk if not controlled on time often leading to self injury or overkill on the part of the enemy. This form usually only happens when he starts feeling overpowered by his enemies. He currently can't activate it consciously and it only activates in the most extreme of situations such as if he's injured but has to keep fighting. Only in life and death situations or when he starts feeling extreme anger, anxiety, or determination which rarely occur to him seem to activate this form of his aura. He has only been in this form a few times including the time when he first sought out a fight on his own which lead to uncontrollable fits of violence and anger along with the desire to save his friend from certain death. If he stays in this form for too long he loses consciousness and blacks out which is why Xarias tends to avoid being cornered by keeping his distance or by constantly moving. He also tries his best to keep this power in check by controlling his emotions at the last moment when he starts feeling it activate; though it takes a huge amount of effort to control, his desire to not lose himself and those around him usually keeps him calm.



WEAPON

Name: Relentless Fury

Primary Form: Powerful semi-automatic double barreled long ranged rifle capable of piercing through heavy armor. Has two blades on it's end to be used as a bayonet if an enemy comes withing melee distance. Barrels shoot consecutively, while one gun locks a bullet in place the other can shoot, this is to improve shooting speed. Range is longest in this form and can shoot targets from far away. Has a dual magazine cartridge that empties into both barrels. Has both high velocity rounds for far targets and some slightly lighter ones for other forms of the weapon.

Secondary Form: Rifle splits into two halves and hinges on the edge to form a bi-ended partisan. which can shoot both the main gun and a grappling part with the blade extending out with a chain attached. Only one side is capable of grappling at any given moment due to the length of the chain. Melee damage is significantly larger in this form due to the weight and momentum that can be used along with the gun parts. Can be used to dash in and out of battle by using the momentum of the rifle.

Tertiary Form: Gun splits completely at the middle to form two medium ranged gunblades. This enhances melee speed and grappling to two surfaces for mobility but grappling is shortened due to limited chain length.

History: This weapons was a result of constant tinkering and improvement by Xarias at the academy to improve both long range and short ranged capabilities as well as mobility.


Last edited by xariasfury55 on Tue Nov 19, 2013 7:46 am; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Edited title to match name, and formatting.)
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PostSubject: Re: Xarias Fury   Xarias Fury Icon_minitimeMon Nov 18, 2013 1:06 am

Few things.

More expansion on the strengths and weaknesses. How are they strengths? How are they weaknesses? Any particular triggers etc?

The semblance needs to be defined a bit better. At the moment it's a danger sense/speed boost/power boost/accuracy boost/defense-reflex boost. I'd say pick one or two of these things and focus on them exclusively. Don't try to be a jack of all trades.

Weapon seems like more than a tri form weapon. It could be argued that the Primary form is a dual-form in itself with the grappling effect.
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PostSubject: Re: Xarias Fury   Xarias Fury Icon_minitimeMon Nov 18, 2013 5:44 am

Thanks. I'll try to focus on the characters semblance and now that I think about it he might seem overpowered if it's too many. I'll try to improve. Thanks for the advice.
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PostSubject: Re: Xarias Fury   Xarias Fury Icon_minitimeMon Nov 18, 2013 12:45 pm

Alright, strengths and weaknesses work.

One last thing with the Semblance - the subconscious part...now the way I see it, you mean to trigger it as effectively a limit break. A last ditch hurrah in the final hour sort of thing. That is fine. But it needs to be clarified a bit - does it trigger only in the most extreme circumstances or can it subconsciously trigger at other times?
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PostSubject: Re: Xarias Fury   Xarias Fury Icon_minitimeTue Nov 19, 2013 7:47 am

Got it. Thanks again for the advice.
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PostSubject: Re: Xarias Fury   Xarias Fury Icon_minitimeTue Nov 19, 2013 12:33 pm

+1 Approval. Now for another mod to look at this.
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PostSubject: Re: Xarias Fury   Xarias Fury Icon_minitimeWed Nov 20, 2013 12:07 am

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