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PostSubject: Carter Marlow   Carter Marlow Icon_minitimeSat Nov 30, 2013 4:32 am

Name: Carter Marlow

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Symbol: A circle with a red background with a yellow shield in the middle with a blue star inside.

Occupation: Student

Appearance: He's tall with very pale skin and brown hair and has light blue eyes and wears black jeans and black tennis shoes and a blue long sleeve shirt and has a yellow 5 pouched belt around his waist and a red quiver.

History: He grew up in Vale and he usually snuck around his home getting food at night. He also had a sister that was the same age has him who always paranoid him. His best friend always talked him into stuff but one day he went to far and talked Carter into sneaking out of Vale's border. When they did an Ursa spotted them but a hunter killed it then the hunter gave them a lecture about not going outside the border. But the kids left when he wasn't looking. But that inspired Carter to become a hunter and went to Signal academy and recently got into Beacon academy with his sister.

Personality: Carter is nervous in public and when he's in public his personality changes. He tries to make jokes whenever again and likes to be silly. When he's around family he doesn't talk much but when he talks its hard for him to stop. In public he talks a lot to friends and is a lot more lively.

Strength: He's stealthy, and smart in battle.

Weakness: He's weak, and allergic to grass, mice, house dust, and cats. He's also slow and can't swim.

Semblance: His aura allows him to turn invisible. He thinks about his surroundings and it acts like a camo. Helping him with his stealth. But he can't move or he will appear.

Weapon
Name: Suncross

Primary form: A red and yellow 3 ft. Buckler.

Secondary form: A red and yellow bow with Blue broadhead, Red shaft , Yellow fletching arrows.

History: He made it in Signal academy. It is made out of Iron and Steel.


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PostSubject: Re: Carter Marlow   Carter Marlow Icon_minitimeSat Nov 30, 2013 6:00 pm

I'd like to see more detail just about everywhere. I'm fine with everything you have up there as a base, but it all needs to be added to in order to pass.
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PostSubject: Re: Carter Marlow   Carter Marlow Icon_minitimeSat Nov 30, 2013 11:21 pm

I've updated it.
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PostSubject: Re: Carter Marlow   Carter Marlow Icon_minitimeSun Dec 01, 2013 8:05 pm

Is he able to move while using his semblance?

if yes I think it should be nearly invisible.

if no I'm fine with it.
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PostSubject: Re: Carter Marlow   Carter Marlow Icon_minitimeMon Dec 02, 2013 5:05 pm

I put he can't move or he will appear.
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PostSubject: Re: Carter Marlow   Carter Marlow Icon_minitimeMon Dec 02, 2013 5:44 pm

Alright.

Approval +1
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PostSubject: Re: Carter Marlow   Carter Marlow Icon_minitimeMon Dec 02, 2013 6:46 pm

Approved.
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