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PostSubject: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSat Dec 07, 2013 5:01 am

CHARACTER

Name: Thana Steel

Age: 18

Gender: F

Species: Human

Height: 172 cm

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Brown-black

Symbol: whirlwind

Occupation: Student of Beacon

Appearance: A tall slender girl, she looks strong and colected when you first met her. Her black hair is cut short, like a male, and seemingly always looks messy (Thus, making her more like a boy). She wears a black shirt, alongside with a gray colored jacket. Her long jacket sleeve is always tucked to her elbow, and only be tucked out when it is cold. She have a small, cross like scar in her left cheek. A result of her training.

History: (Since it is not clear what kind of goal does Villain have in RWBY universe (and Monty is most unlikely is not going to release a “How to make a Villain in RWBY Universe” tutorial, i’ll stick with Human vs Faunus)
Thana is the youngest of five, and the older four are all boys. Her family have been serving in the Army for generations, and when the Faunus war broke out her family was involved too. Her father survived, as he is a high ranking officer in the Army, but all her four brothers are not.

The death of all four son deals a great psychology shock to her father, who have already prepares them to take over his position some day later. Even thought her mother was against it, her father still force Thana to train like what a soldier would. He even raises and sees her like a son.

Her childhood days is filled with harsh training that did not fit her age nor her psychical body. And when she failed to meet her father’s expectation, he would beat her up. Her father would always cry after beating her up, regretting what he just did and crying over her dead brothers. After he calmed down, he would tell her stories about Faunus.
Because of this, she hates the Faunus and wanted to get rid of them so that her father can be proud of her.

Was sent to Beacon by her mother, the only person in the family that is not consumed by revenge and sadness, that wanted to see her daughter becoming as normal as she is and gaining new friends including a Faunus friend. (And she also wanted to make her daughter away from her father influence)

Personality: Sly, manipulative, tricky, and wickedly smart. She is average good at the Academy, but when she is thrown in a battlefield she is a Think Tank. She hates Faunus greatly, but always managed to hide this whenever she is with a Faunus. She is also a calm and collected person. An introvert, but when ever she is with people she trusted she will be a very active person. A loyal and trust worthy person to her friend, and a frightening enemy.

Strength: Combining her good reflexes, sharp instinct, and speed, she would always forced her enemy to follow her speed. She is a fully confident person, especially when she have something in mind. She knows that she cannot strike hard, because of this she will speed up and strike her enemy on their weak or blind spot with several strike at once if possible.

Weakness: Cannot strike a devastating damage, because of this her fight will usually be a long one. She would always try to avoid fighting long enough, because she can easily drain out her stamina. Suffers a sinusitis which could make her condition even worse.

Semblance: Battle Healing A special semblance belong to the Steels. The gray colored aura will envelope her. This semblance will enhance her recovery ability, and can only used during combat. It will heal small cut in seconds, and it takes time for a more fatal and deep wound.

WEAPON

Weapon Name: Vortex

Primary Form: A medium sized sword like Roman Glaidus, but will look as simple as Rapier (Picture in progress). A gun is attached into the cross-guard. The grip is made of magnet.

Secondary Form: Vortex's primary form is actually is two thin twin blade, which glued as one easily with the help of the magnetic grip and locked together with the help of the pommel. (When Thana fired the gun, she actually shot twice)

Tertiary Form: This form will be created as soon as you stick the pommel together, and it will locked it self automatically with a mechanism that have been set. While using this form, however, it is impossible to use the guns

History: Her father give it to her as a gift for her birthday, in the same year when the war ends. Her father designed it him self as he fully knows that Vortex would fit his daughter fast paced combat style perfectly


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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSat Dec 07, 2013 7:30 pm

Everything looks good. Approval 1/2

I do want to note that +speed/agility is a SUPER, SUPER common semblance. Everyone has it. Its fine and accepted, but just letting you know in case you had another idea you wanted to use in place of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSat Dec 07, 2013 7:37 pm

How about slowing down time? Not completely stop it, just slowing it down
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSat Dec 07, 2013 7:40 pm

Things that can't be avoided by others aren't really fair. Also, if it slows down time for everyone except your character, its the same thing as a speed boost to yourself.
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSat Dec 07, 2013 9:51 pm

how about simple protective layer like what Jaune have?
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSat Dec 07, 2013 10:37 pm

Sure that works.
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSat Dec 07, 2013 10:39 pm

Throwing in my input here. You can have something that speeds up Thana's perception of things, kind of like a bullet-time thing. You'd gain more time to react and act accordingly, but wouldn't have anything unavoidable.

As far as the protective aura thing goes, you can go for that, if you'd like. Just make sure you mention that it's a 'toggle' thing, and not passive.
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSun Dec 08, 2013 3:28 am

Is "Battle Healing"/"Recovery" semblance allowed? The idea is that the semblance/aura will heal her, even thought it's not instant healing and it will take longer time for fatal/deeper wound
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSun Dec 08, 2013 4:04 am

Yep, healing related semblances are allowed. Just make sure you mention that it's not always active.
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSun Dec 08, 2013 7:05 am

fixed it. Something like that?
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSun Dec 08, 2013 12:49 pm

Seems fine to me. Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Thana Steel   Thana Steel Icon_minitimeSun Dec 08, 2013 1:44 pm

Looks good.
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